Thanks for sharing your work on a trip to Antarctica. What an amazing place it is! It truly is a magical untouched part of the world! I saw a programme on TV last week about a boat trip to Antarctica. They had put cameras on the boat and filmed the trip there. It should all the ice and animals along the way. It was quite amazing.
I really don't like the cold but it is hard to imagine just how cold it would be there in the winter!
Hope all is going well with your online learning, I enjoyed reading this Hannah. Keep up the great work!
Kia ora Hannah, I can tell that you love the Antarctic wildlife. I like the use of the black background as the photos and information stand out clearly. I aso like your eye-catching titles and the amazing cover photo.
Kia Ora! My name is Maddison a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
WOW! I love the beautiful pictures that match your outstanding work! I think that this story was an awesome piece of work! I loved your DLO.
I think that there is a few things that you could touch up on though. First I think that you could have written about why you wrote this and what you did to make it. Is it a story? Why did you chose these pictures etc. I hope you could consider some of these things next time :D.
Hi Hannah! My name is Teegan, a year 8 student from YMS! My grandfather used to fly the planes to and from Antarctica! He didn't fly to the NZ bases a lot, but he did work in the American bases! I would personally love to go to antarctica so I could see all of the penguins. Is this a real thing you actually did? Please let me know. Great Blog! Kind Regards,
Hi Hannah
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your work on a trip to Antarctica. What an amazing place it is! It truly is a magical untouched part of the world!
I saw a programme on TV last week about a boat trip to Antarctica. They had put cameras on the boat and filmed the trip there. It should all the ice and animals along the way. It was quite amazing.
I really don't like the cold but it is hard to imagine just how cold it would be there in the winter!
Hope all is going well with your online learning, I enjoyed reading this Hannah.
Keep up the great work!
Talk again soon
Mrs Costello :)
Kia ora Hannah, I can tell that you love the Antarctic wildlife. I like the use of the black background as the photos and information stand out clearly. I aso like your eye-catching titles and the amazing cover photo.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora! My name is Maddison a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteWOW! I love the beautiful pictures that match your outstanding work!
I think that this story was an awesome piece of work! I loved your DLO.
I think that there is a few things that you could touch up on though. First I think that you could have written about why you wrote this and what you did to make it. Is it a story? Why did you chose these pictures etc. I hope you could consider some of these things next time :D.
Keep It Up!
-Maddie from, YMS.
Hi Hannah!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Teegan, a year 8 student from YMS!
My grandfather used to fly the planes to and from Antarctica!
He didn't fly to the NZ bases a lot, but he did work in the American bases!
I would personally love to go to antarctica so I could see all of the penguins. Is this a real thing you actually did?
Please let me know.
Great Blog!
Kind Regards,
- Teegan J. Ducharme