Wednesday, April 22, 2020

My Trip To Antarctica

5 comments:

  1. Hi Hannah

    Thanks for sharing your work on a trip to Antarctica. What an amazing place it is! It truly is a magical untouched part of the world!
    I saw a programme on TV last week about a boat trip to Antarctica. They had put cameras on the boat and filmed the trip there. It should all the ice and animals along the way. It was quite amazing.

    I really don't like the cold but it is hard to imagine just how cold it would be there in the winter!

    Hope all is going well with your online learning, I enjoyed reading this Hannah.
    Keep up the great work!

    Talk again soon

    Mrs Costello :)

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  2. Hello Mrs Costello!

    I just want to let you know that Ms. P told us to make a blog post about going to Antarctica. Sorry to say this but it's just fictional :(

    I would really like to go there one day but for now I have to stay at home and watch documentaries or movies about it. I hope you are doing all right and staying home.

    -Hannah

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  3. Kia ora Hannah, I can tell that you love the Antarctic wildlife. I like the use of the black background as the photos and information stand out clearly. I aso like your eye-catching titles and the amazing cover photo.

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  4. Kia Ora! My name is Maddison a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.

    WOW! I love the beautiful pictures that match your outstanding work!
    I think that this story was an awesome piece of work! I loved your DLO.

    I think that there is a few things that you could touch up on though. First I think that you could have written about why you wrote this and what you did to make it. Is it a story? Why did you chose these pictures etc. I hope you could consider some of these things next time :D.

    Keep It Up!
    -Maddie from, YMS.

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  5. Hi Hannah!
    My name is Teegan, a year 8 student from YMS!
    My grandfather used to fly the planes to and from Antarctica!
    He didn't fly to the NZ bases a lot, but he did work in the American bases!
    I would personally love to go to antarctica so I could see all of the penguins. Is this a real thing you actually did?
    Please let me know.
    Great Blog!
    Kind Regards,

    - Teegan J. Ducharme

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