This is a great memory poem, I really enjoyed reading it. Well done! I love how you have described summer, it really makes me wish that it was summer right now. I can't wait for summer again. Go away rain!!
Well done and keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home!
Kia ora Hannah Your poem captures so much about summer. Today is the first day of Spring so not long to wait until those hazy, lazy days of summer! I like the clever use of descriptive words e.g flaming hot concrete, mellow nights. The summer tree background and bordered words, create an effective layout.
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This is a great memory poem, I really enjoyed reading it. Well done!
I love how you have described summer, it really makes me wish that it was summer right now.
I can't wait for summer again. Go away rain!!
Well done and keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home!
Until next time
Mrs Costello :)
Kia ora Hannah
ReplyDeleteYour poem captures so much about summer. Today is the first day of Spring so not long to wait until those hazy, lazy days of summer! I like the clever use of descriptive words e.g flaming hot concrete, mellow nights.
The summer tree background and bordered words, create an effective layout.